Last Sunday, it was a fine  day. My parents and I went to the zoo. My father drove a car with us to get  there .

First, we went shopping  together. We bought many things, such as ice cream, oranges, milk and bread. I  liked them very much. Then we went to the zoo. I saw many animals. The monkeys  were very interesting. The elephant were very big. The pandas  were very cute. We had our lunch under a big  tree. After that, we saw many trees and flowers near the lake. Some were green.  some were white. And some were yellow .We played near the lake .We were sitting  under a big tree, and we made some paper ships.

We had a good time.  

五年级国际班：罗施达

点评：小作者能用正确的时态，恰当的句型把自己在动物园所看到的事物描绘出来。不错！

(指导老师：黄潇)