Have you ever been to  Shenzhen? If your answer is no, you should take action right now. In my opinion,  Shenzhen is a tremendous city with a lot of passion. 30 years ago，Shenzhen was a  fishing village. But now Shenzhen is not only a modern city, but also is the  youngest city in China .

Shenzhen's traffic is also  very busy now . There are a lot of buses, taxis, subways, cars and trucks. Life  is very fast now. So it is easy to get to anywhere in Shenzhen .  And there are many interesting places. For  example: Splendid China, Happy Valley, The Window of the World, and so  on. In the day time, you can visit the beautiful parks and go shopping, while  you can also walk along the river bank at night.
That's my simple reason why  Shenzhen has become my favorite city.

What about your  city?

五年级国际班：林皓廉

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